no...no...

I have to say, I've certainly seen worse attempts. Your storyboard's OK, A few grammatical errors here and there, anatomy and perspective are fair to good.
Please continue.

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There is really no reason to be mean, every artist no matter how good needs improvement. Posting reaction images without any real critique isn't really helping anyone. Anyone carries on being pointlessly horrible is going to see this image :3

>>8456
True. But while I'm as much as supportive of people like you, I think an imageboard is the last place I'd look for a critique or guide.

Well.. I will try to be constructive, I hope you do not mind.

Also, if you are like me, getting an English conversation partner/editor will help polish dialogue.

lemme point out that the true purpose for kemono imageboard is so people could upload and see JAPANESE content.
Not some wapanese scribbling and cliche plots

Work on your anatomy and perspectives. Get some sense of body forms before trying comic format. There's too much repetition of front and profile positions. Also, you should practice paneling techniques by learning from other comics.

I'm all for asking for critique, but you're better off getting it at DA or Furaffinity.

>>8451
Please don't let this place degenerate into a shithole like pawsru. The art is bad, but this doesn't help anybody.

LOL

This "comic" was written in English etc. so technically, It shouldn't even be on Doujin Board.
Please chuck this somewhere appropriate like translated or oekaki lol

I think rules will need to be clarified, as translation requests keep getting put into /translated/ as well...

If this was in oekaki or discussion I don't think people would mind as much.

Well you must understand anon,
we where all newbies before.
Just give this person some time and I'm sure aslong as this person keeps at it, he will end up somewhere better than you expected.
I and several artist I know went throught the same process.
I'm glad you pointed out flaws but just keep it at a calm level and the translated doujin and thus being in doujin cant be changed. ( Or can it? )
Anyways just give this person a break and let him practice.
:D

Is there an art site were you post Ryuka? i would be interested in following your work and give you some tips.

Hey, it's an understandable mistake. If anything, hey Ryuka, just post some of your work in the Oekaki section of the site. That's where folks can post original works.

I'ma cum slut

>>8446
Im also practicing draw but usually alot of furry artist practice human style first here is a pic of my work (p.s. This thread should be deleted or moved)

>>8461
THIS.
This thread needs to be deleted.

>>15189
lrn2sage

everyone...don't preak the balls, it's cute!